If I Were To Be
Gilded splinterscascadingon sunrise light rainspitting heat..I am exact and brokentracing tiny scratches on a curved horizonwhich vomits rainbows& breathes echoes that slantfamiliar kissing...
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Quote:I am sure to be..that simple scar across your heart,I am pain.Wonderful write, Sammi~! There's so much here to take in... I'm going back for more ~Alaura
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I have never thought of vomit and rainbows appearing in the same line. Your train of thought reveals an interesting direction, Samantha. Enjoyed the read.Annette
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thankies Alaura, I know this piece to be long, but my mind was overcrowded, so I appreciate your reading and replyinghugs &Keep Shining!Sammie
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Hiya Annette,Am glad you brought that up! I was anxious to use vomit and rainbows in the same sentence, but I was trying to force that rainbow out, and vomit kept jumping into my minds eye-( a...
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Samantha, there are few folk I always run to read no matter what page I find them on, and one of them is you!Great feeling expressed, in language that pulls smoothly across pain, joy and all the...
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Sammie, you express yourself so well, and so creative too.. this leaves me thinking, and leaves me wanting to go back for more. Loved it. ~Mystic~ "No matter how bad things are,tomorrow's alwaysa new...
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Your words as always move...this is a fantastic scribe and like those before me I am going back for more.Hope you are doing better now.Dinah
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Samantha, it is good to read you again. I hope you are doing well. Kathleen
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to satrtand finish on the same note with such strong imagery in between Samantha is a damn good piece of work ivor
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WHOA!! And didn't I read something somewhere about a certain someone being concerned about whether or not she'd still be able to write? Something like that? Um hmmm, um hmmm...Someone can DEFINITELY...
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No one is ever complete. We're either too selfish or too giving. But you were close with this piece. You are bright amongst the brightest scribes."I love being a writer, but I hate the paper work."
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Sammie, After reading the poem, I read the comments by those who admire your wonderful talent with the quill. I felt like saying, "I agree with all that's been said." You are one in a million when it...
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Sammie, well lass your poetry is always a great treat to me,This one was so rich and deep. A wonder read and a pleasure. I hope your health is better and look foreward to reading more of your lovely...
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Beautifully ornate and intricate. This is a pen-dance that glides well across the minds' floor.DanWords are the mind's bridge - it's connection to all the universe.Love is the heart's bridge - it's...
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Oh hugest hugs to my poetic family! your replies are uplifting I love them all and am grateful!I am in fear of my poetry being a little jumbled of late, I have so much to spill but I can get words...
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